Sunday, June 12, 2016

Report writing workshop

WALT: write a factual report about the weather in autumn.
WILF:  
- a general introduction that introduces the topic
- ideas grouped into paragraphs with each paragraph focusing on a different idea
- a variety of different sentence lengths 
- a conclusion that sums up the topic

Here is my report:

In Autumn the mornings get icier 
and car windows freeze. It gets windier
and sunny.


Nights and days are different to to summer
Because nights are longer and cooler
and days are shorter and cooler. 


Later in Autumn days cooler and start 
to rain,sometimes it buckets down 
Sometime it's a thunder storm.

But a great time to go
mushrooming because the mushrooms 
Have pretty pink insides because that need 
water and warmth.



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